I'm not a fan of this one but sometimes an older or unsuccessful work needs to be posted to better understand why it didn't work.

The short answer on this one is lack of detail, lack of understanding, and lack of understanding on how to add detail. I still like the stark division between the two areas, but everything is lacking in thought and detail. With copic markers I'm not sure I could get in all the small details I would want on the mountains, so perhaps it's one to allow additional materials and media on (such as coloured pencil)

We'll see if I redo this one soon